you have too many normal targets for rabbit i think u should add tour guide in so u have defense of some kind. OR a better way is to add gravity bound and level limit TO LOCK YOUR OPPONENT WHILE U TAKE UR TIME TO XYZ. HEHE

Thanks for the input!

Well... to give good advice i need to know, exactly what version of rabbit is this. Dino? Warrior? Vanilla?

im actually doing a reconstruction for a dino deck, so advice bout dino would be good

Well, first you dont need nearly that many normal monsters. Just include three of each of your sabersauras and kabazauls.

Also try some hydrogeddon and Jurrac Guiaba. You don't much need double summon a it burns our hand. You need some forbidden lance, and a Sangan. Also, Pot of Avarice is important.

Thank you very much

include goblinberge in case u need defense