Free verse eh? Seems like something I'd do, by that I mean i used to practice free verse a lot.
I like it because it's raw. It's imperfect in that you didn't try to make it rhyme, and the message itself expresses how you view love as a somewhat imperfect art as well. All in all a great bit of coincidence there, or perhaps the intent of a genius not quite sure. Either way it's nicely done, I do hope to see more from you in the future ^.^