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Ventriloquist

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PostSubject: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 11:21 am

Title: Reap.
 
Pointless thoughts and shattered dreams, All a waste of time it seems.
Thought someday I'd have it all, forget the risk and take the fall.
Now I'm falling, fades to black, I'll never get what i once had back.
I've lost my way and lost my soul, and now I'm trapped within this hole.
I ask you now but aren't we all, an endless fathom awaits us all.
Indeed my friend tis just fair warning, here with me you'll soon be joining.
A waist of breathe a waist of time, to try and deny death's chilling chime.
But death comes not at the end of life, but tis more cruel it'll take first your wife.
It'll take your children take your dreams, it'll take all from you it seems.
Before one day you greet him kindly, and follow Mr. Reaper oh so blindly.
Down the bottomless pit you go, its where he casts you its where your thrown.
And so here I fall here I plummet, never again to see life's summit.
We are born on top as a sick little joke, perhaps placed there by some unknown...reaper loving bloke.


~ Baby don't fear the reaper.  ~
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 11:30 am

Very well done, Vent. This is so very true too.
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 3:57 pm

Even if it was true its really really sad Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 7:37 pm

Very nice. You're very talented.
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 7:57 pm

Ofc he is vent afterall Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyThu Jul 04, 2013 8:41 pm

Yo, good piece. Line 12 was a bit awkward, but otherwise, I liked it.  I believe this is the first time I've seen you do poetry, good to know I'm not the only guy from the hood that does poetry XD (Though mine sucks a bit)
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PostSubject: Re: Rather a Poem   Rather a Poem EmptyFri Jul 05, 2013 12:57 pm

Wow, love the praise! I actually do not do poetry very often but as for the rare times I do; this is likely one of my better pieces if not the best. All in all it's not my strong suit. Anyway thanks everyone ^.^ trying to make a bit of a come back as far as this site and just writing and such in general goes so be prepared to see more from me soon! Thanks again and seen you all again soon!
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