First topic message reminder :


Ok, Basic logic applies. ALL CHARACTER WILL BE HUMAN! That aside, you are free to explore any sorts of magic including shape shifting(Eventually but NOT YET! Meaning fully, completely human in both story and character right now). Basic rules are things like do not make a God Mod Character. Meaning don't make him all powerful and perfect. Character MUST HAVE FLAWS! Please be sure to add them, and make them obvious in the BIO section. This makes your character interesting and approachable. Now, for the character sheet no? Read on my friends, read on.


Rather simple, would you like to play a teacher, or a student. Teacher must show a knowledge in the field they wish to teach so pm me about this. Or state you know what your doing your post with your sheet. ALSO! You may play both a teacher and a student, simply create two character sheets, as one character cannot be both, but one player indeed can.


Ethnicity: Are you black, white, asian?
Hometown: Self explanatory, can be fictional or realistic.
Grade Level: Freshman through senior OR Teacher, in which case state the class you are teacher like; Alchemy Teacher, etc.
Name: Character's Name.
Alias: If any.
Age: Hold old is your character?
Sex: Character's Sex.
Birth Date: Character's Birthday.
Magic Affinity: What magic does your character specialize in? (Though you can purchase magic outside your affinity, you will be weaker in it.)
Height: Character's Height.
Weight: Character's Weight.
Eyes: Character's Eye Color.
Hair: Character's Hair color and style.
Other: Other Information of your Character you want to add.
Picture: Picture of your Character.
Small Bio: There is no length recruitment, feel free to write as much or as little as you want but do try to write as much as you "Can" so that other come to know your character better. ADD FLAWS AND STRENGTHS HERE!
Magic Purchases: This section will be updated by a mod or admin as you learn new magics. Upon entering the academy you will have "None" until you fill out an app for magic selection, which will be coming soon so look for the link in the main RP thread.
Quote: Quote for you character. Yes this is needed.



Send in this sheet, in a post in this thread and your character will be looked over, and decided if they are acceptable. I will have final say in this, but will talk it over with most likely Moku and Blaze. That said, send those apps people! That is all!

Shapeshifting is what the term says: Shifting the shape, no matter if willingly or unwillingly. Shapeshifting in generel is not in the RP as of yet.

I like the idea of the curse, but he could do it diffrently, so that is stays in the boundries of the RP.
Maybe his magical powers were sealed off, and he is having trouble joining the academy because of it, even though he was invited beforehand.

Yes, the curse is an epic idea, ...just no werewolf curses. Maybe his curse makes him black out and go into a rampage, maybe it makes him ABLE to know what he is doing mentally, but lose control of his body. Maybe it cuts off his magic completely making it very easy for someone to attack him. Etc, these ideas would be awesome but shapeshifting of anykind. Literally...anything non human is not allowed. I would not, for instance, allow you to transform from a human to a god damned bunny rabbit lol. It is the simple fact that that magic DOES NOT EXHIST YET! So it cannot be done. That is the only issue and if this issue is resolved then levers character would be find and dandy. Myself and rain have suggested make it more believable, thats just a bit of 2 cents. Add some depth in other ways, change this, we arent being mean we are being critical, telling you what you "CAN" Improve. BUt what you HAVE to improve...is get the damned shapeshifting wolf the outa there. Im sick and tired of seeing ooc on this thread now get it over with and get it done. It's really....quite...simple, and this has become a very pointless arguement.

I admit I went a bit overboard here, and I apologize for it.
But! I still refuse to accept the claim that my character is overpowered for some odd reason.

Ethnicity:Hispanic/White
Hometown: Aquaria,Elementos
Grade Level: Freshmen
Name: Augusto Lopez
Alias: Aj,Aquo
Age:14
Sex:Male
Birth Date:9-22-98
Magic Affinity: Element (Water all forms)
Height:5'1"
Weight:80 lbs
Eyes:Dark Brown,Glasses
Hair:Dark Brown,Kinda short
Magical purchases:?
Personality: Smart,Kind,Honest,Anti-social,and is a great friend
Strengths: Intelligent, quick on his feet
Weaknesses: Weak body
Small
Bio: Augusto is a young boy who grew up in a family of prestigious
magic users all highly regarded in the academy. He is highly intelligent
and has been in the top of all his classes. Due to the fact he was born
a very sickly child,any physical harm done to him can severely harm
him.
Because of his weak condition,Augusto was constantly bullied, this
caused him to unknowingly create a split personality,his other per
appears whenever he is in a physical confrontation. When he was in 6th grade on a great day ,Augusto's birthday,a bully named Will,the ex of one of his friends that he had a crush on. He made fun of him and pushed him around and one day at recess Augusto was with his friends(who were all females) and Will went and grabbed him and pushed him to the ground and punched him. This is when his split personality
was born. Augusto had enough of the bullying and later on when someone
tried to hurt him his other persona would take over and beat the person
up and Augusto wouldn't remember any of this. One day, the persona went
on a rampage and injured many people and no one wanted to be friends
with him so he moved and made new friends but had new bullies as well.

Quote:"If I could hold back the rain,would you know the pain?"

Picture:

i realized i forgot a pic so here
http://hueyyeng.deviantart.com/art/Negima-73399910

http://mielru.deviantart.com/art/black-hair-brown-eyes-290104737


i couldnt decide and Thanks Blazer for the help

Ethnicity: white


Hometown: England


Grade Level: Freshman.


Name: volor godspell.


Alias: phantom theif lupin


Age: 16


Sex:Male

Birth Date: 1/9/1997

Magic Affinity:None as of now


Height: 5,10

Weight: 135 pounds

Eyes: black

Hair: black kept short

Other: smart well tempered but cant tell a joke to save his life

Picture: http://media.animevice.com/uploads/1/18405/574843-sword_art_online___09___large_31.jpg

Small Bio:As a child was abandoned and placed in an orphanage that had many children but very little money room or food.But the care takes wear very kind even without the room money or food they truly needed to take care of all the children.Valor being the person that he was could not stand to see the other children go without food started to rob food from the local market and for some time that was all he did. But one night he heard the care takers talking about how they didn't have the money to feed all the children and house them all to was not possible with the donations they wear currently getting and to make matters worst the orphanage was in so much duet that if they didn't do something soon they would be evicted! Valor could not accept that as just being it that he would just stand by and do nothing while his family his friends needed him for although he never said so that is what they wear for him. After all the man and woman that had given birth to him had simply threw him away the first opportunity they had goten. So valor decided that it was time he did more then simply rob just bread and fruits he decided that he had to take action to save his home and his family. He started by picking pockets he was found out a few times and had to run from the cops but gradually he got better and better tell he could pick pockets easily. But in the end it amounted to only a fraction of the duet that the orphanage had so he decided that he had to move on to bigger targets. He practiced for many days and nights tell he moved more silently and stealthy then a black cat at midnight and he moved just as fast. He looked at the most expensive homes looked at the town hall for blue prints and used some money to buy some security devices like alarm systems and locks to practice on. He even went as far as renting a warehouse to set this all up and practice the robberies before hand and hes was good. The news even called him the second coming of legendary phantom thief lupin they said he could rob any thing and so it appeared to the world and even to Valor him self. Though they say pride comes before a fall and valor was no exception though he did it all for his family he still had great pride in his skills as a thief and as a man and that would lead to the greatest tragedy valor would ever have to bare witness to and it all could have been avoided if he had simply not read the paper that morning but then fate is cruel or maybe it was just destiny that this was to happen for what he read would change his life and the lives of everyone he ever cared for forever. Valor read that a prominent family "unknown to him at the time they wear also a criminal family that specialized in obtaining magical items and weapons by any means they deemed necessary" was visiting the county and wear bringing many treasures with them. His pride getting the better of him valor decided that they would be his next target and with this the orphanage would finally be saved their duets payed and they would have more money left over then they could uses in five life times.

Valor studied the lay out of his victims home it would be the hardest job he would he had ever done but was confident that he could pull the job off and at first he was right everything went just as he had planned that is tell he met a young woman. She had hair that was golden like the sun even at night it shined like fire and eyes as cool as ice, that wear a blue deeper and more vast and spectacular then the sea. For all valors planning he had not though that he would be seen by any one much less the most stuning girl he had ever layed his eyes on. After he got over his amazement at this girl he started to panic trying to think of some way to stop hear from shouting about the mysterious young boy in her home. But to his amazement she did not call out for guards but simplely asked for him to wait and not to run and if he tryed she would scream. With no forseable options he did as the girl asked of him. Then the girl walked up to him and asked him something he hadn't expected. Will you take me with you take me away from this place. To this Valor asked why in the world he would bring her with him she may have bean the prettiest girl he had ever seen but she didnt even now him and she would also just be died weight and he hadn't even gotten what he had came for yet. To this she replied that if he did not bring her she would call the guards to this Valor pulled out a dagger faster then her eyes could keep up with and asked do you think you would have time with a voice as sharp as any blade that would cut any normal person right down to their core and to that she responded that she new from looking in to Valors eyes that he would not in fact harm her and that if he did as she asked she would show him to wear all the money and valuables wear kept and that she would even open the safe doors for him her self. Now Valor new she was right he had no intent of harming the girl and he proposition would not only make sure that he was not discovered but would speed up the job feather and maybe make up for the time he had lost talking to this girl so he told her he excepted her terms as long as she didn't slow him down too much. To this she was over joyed and quickly Valor put his hand over her mouth and told hear to keep down. Though now that he thought about it he could not keep calling this young woman girl so he asked her name and to this she said Xion and with that she started to lead the way to Valors prize . Finally Xion opened a door and lead Valor inside she grabbed his hand and pulled him along tell they reached a huge vault with a hand print scanner with that Valor was glad that he had brought along Xion after all because this would have taken forever to break in to. Wean Xion opened the door it was better then Valor had ever hoped for and so he started to pack his bags with money and jewels. That is tell something caught his eye's an old sword rusty and probably not worth much at all but with odd ruins on it. Though he had never seen them before he spoke them aloud bestiam magnam. Then with a flash the sword light aflame and it was reborn in a blaze of glory. Then suddenly a guard came in out of no wear. Going on pure instinct Valor slashed at the guard from shock and gave him a deep gash across his chest to Valors dismay. Valor freaked out from the shock of what he had done rapped up the mans wound well Xion tryed to pull him away saying they must have trigered a silent alarm. So they ran with the money he had grabbed so far and the sword and they ran. To Valors amazement they made it out of the manors grounds without in countering any more guards though they wear chased by some dogs.after this Valor ran along with Xion to his warehouse and their the slept for the night. Valor with his haul woke up early in the morning to make it to the black market to sell his goods. But stopped wean a friend warned him that two bad looking men wear asking about him and a young woman that happened to be Xion and him self and they wear offering a reward for any one that could give them info on his wear abouts. Valor immediately got nervous for their is no honor among thieves. After he left he ran right to the warehouse to look for Xion she was fine and there was no one in sight. Then a dread full idea came to his mind how had they gotten his picture how had they known wear he was and if they know that much then there was the worst chase scenario they had gone to the orphanage with that though dread filled Valor to his very soul his skin turned paler then snow his blood ran colder then ice. With that thought Valor ran ran faster then any human should have bean able to run and before long the smell of smoke hit him like a wall and terror toke Valors heart and for the first time ever in his life Valor felt fear incarnate. When he got to the orphanage it was already a raging inferno but that didn't stop Valor for a second without a though for it valor broke open the door and ran inside. He ran all over the orphanage grabbing any of the children he could find and pulling them out of the fire. he had gotten almost all of them out wean the support started to give way. With what little time was left before the building fell he grabbed the last of the children along with the care taker ms.natsumi although no one was hurt Valor realized that this was all his fault and that if he had just quit while he was ahead none of this would have happened. So as one last kind act for his home he sould all the jewels he robbed and added that to the money and droped it off in an unmarked bag in ms.natsumis room while she was asleep at the hotel she and the orphans wear staying at. Valor then filled with regret and sadness walked back to the warehouse only to find two men dragging Xion by her arms along while she tryed to break free along with the sword he had stolen. Valor then ran over and punched one of the men though he was almost twice his size and managed to make him lose his balance and let go of xion and the sword. Valor then grabed the sword and tells xion to run. Though valor had a weapon and the two men appeared to be unarmed so Valor was confident that he could win but he was sadly mastaken for they used some strange power to beat him to near uncoincesnice but with the last of his power valor pushed him self over a railing in to a water way and wakes up much later water and tierd on a stony shore. After time spending many days looking Valor found Xion and told her to live with ms.natsumi and the children. That same day Valor was approached by an odd man that offered him a spot in a magical academy as out rages as that may have sounded to any one else to valor it seamed real with all the things he had seen in the last few days. Valor told him that he would go with him to this school if they agreed to protect the people he loved And so Valors true story started their.

Magic Purchases: none

Quote: a theif can steal any thing from you even your life.

sorry i made this so long tell me what ya think what i must change add or remove. :3


Evilpath: Well, this isn't an RP site, so I cannot expect perfection. Get yo ass in the RP :3

All I got from this argument (I don't feel like reading the entire thing.) Is disagreements about the characters. To comment on this. IF YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THE APPROVAL OR DISAPPROVAL OF YOU CHARACTER, GO TO VENT. Also: Stop complaining about OP characters, if you want to complain about them, complain about mine, he is a teacher, he had his powers DIRECTLY given to him by a GODDESS, became her HIGH PRIEST and is 300 years+ with a body of someone in their mid-twenties. All with no previous magical experience. Problem? Let Vent and Rainmaker handle their jobs.

aj16amc wrote:

Ethnicity:Hispanic/White
Hometown: Aquaria,Elementos
Grade Level: Freshmen
Name: Augusto Lopez
Alias: Aj,Aquo
Age:14
Sex:Male
Birth Date:9-22-98
Magic Affinity: Element (Water all forms)
Height:5'1"
Weight:80 lbs
Eyes:Dark Brown,Glasses
Hair:Dark Brown,Kinda short
Magical purchases:?
Personality: Smart,Kind,Honest,Anti-social,and is a great friend
Strengths: Intelligent, quick on his feet
Weaknesses: Weak body
Small
Bio: Augusto is a young boy who grew up in a family of prestigious
magic users all highly regarded in the academy. He is highly intelligent
and has been in the top of all his classes. Due to the fact he was born
a very sickly child,any physical harm done to him can severely harm
him.
Because of his weak condition,Augusto was constantly bullied, this
caused him to unknowingly create a split personality,his other per
appears whenever he is in a physical confrontation. When he was in 6th grade on a great day ,Augusto's birthday,a bully named Will,the ex of one of his friends that he had a crush on. He made fun of him and pushed him around and one day at recess Augusto was with his friends(who were all females) and Will went and grabbed him and pushed him to the ground and punched him. This is when his split personality
was born. Augusto had enough of the bullying and later on when someone
tried to hurt him his other persona would take over and beat the person
up and Augusto wouldn't remember any of this. One day, the persona went
on a rampage and injured many people and no one wanted to be friends
with him so he moved and made new friends but had new bullies as well.

Quote:"If I could hold back the rain,would you know the pain?"

Picture:

You need more detail in the personality section, as well as a more organised and better written bio. You also need to include strengths and weaknesses in the bio.

Evil path is now in charge of approving character being that he is a teacher, and I am no longer an admin. That is all. I will resume my position if I am made an admin again guys. Thank you.

Wow I'm slow I just notive that Blazer is the only girl in the AMA