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Princessvilmisa

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PostSubject: Maskgirl and Maskguy powers unleash powers unleash part 1   Thu Jan 16, 2014 12:16 am

I'm finally going to post my story Maskgirl and Maskguy I hope you guys like it. Oh and Ignore the grammar its horrible.

Jasmine: Aw I can’t believe summer almost over. I had so much fun.
Peter: Me to. The most fun was when we did campfire and told stories.
Jasmine: Yup. Do you remember when we went to the arcade and we did that dance game you feel off?
Peter: Oh yeah I remember you were so embarrassed you wouldn’t come out of your room for a week.
Jasmine: Yeah. I’m never going to forget this summer. Promise that we won’t forget this summer.
Peter: I promise that we won’t forget this summer. I can talk all day but I’m going back to the ocean one last time for a while want to come with Jasmine?
Jasmine: Sure.
Neptune: Eats a hamburger.
The sun comes down and everyone goes home.
Lily: So finally Jasmine powers unleash.

Amanda: Welcome back home son.
Peter: Thank you mom.
Amanda: How was the beach?
Peter: It was so much fun.
Amanda: I’m glad to hear that. Your dinner is on the table.
Peter: Oh alright.
Amanda: Drinks some water.
Peter: Eats.
Jasmine: Puts her stuff away in her room. Gets her labtop and talk on the webcame to one of her best friend name Coolest.
Coolest: Hey Jasmine.
Jasmine: Hey.

Coolest: How are you?
Jasmine: I’m good.
Coolest: That’s good. Sorry I couldn’t make it to the beach I had to babysit my little sister.
Jasmine: it’s okay I understand.
Coolest: Okay good.
Lola: Coolest.
Coolest: I gtg my mom is calling me. Goodnight.
Jasmine: Goodnight. See you at school tomorrow.
Coolest: Clicks off the webcam.
Jasmine: Clicks off the webcam to. Gets ready for bed.
Peter: Peter finishes eating.
Amanda: I’m going to get some sleep goodnight.
Peter: Goodnight mom.
Jasmine: Finishes getting ready for bed. Lays down and fall asleep.

Morning time
Coolest: Good morning Jasmine.
Jasmine: Good morning.
Kyle: Good morning you guys. After class don’t forget to put your homework on my desk. Today’s assignment you guys write down ten sentences the sentences can be about anything. Start now.
Jasmine: Starts to feel weird.
Amanda: Eats breakfast.
Brandon: I’m going to work now bye Amanda.
Amanda: Goodbye and have a good day.
Brandon: Thank you and love you.
Amanda: Love you to.

Brandon leaves.
Amanda: Smiles.
Jasmine goose name Goosey comes in her room and walks around.
Peter: Receives a text a message reads it.
Slayer: Later Peter want to come to my house and play video games?
Peter: Sure dude.
Slayer: Alright.
Jasmine: I can’t find my notebook I think its in my locker can I go see if its there?
Kyle: Sure.
Valkoor: Shops.
Jasmine: Sees her note and gets it. Gets a headache.
Coolest: I wonder where Jasmine went.
Peter: Me to. I wonder.
Jasmine: Was about to open the door to the classroom starts to fly in the air. No way I can fly. Shocked. Senses a necklace in the art musum disappers. Turns into Maskgirl steals the necklace. Fly’s and leaves


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Rose la Kill

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PostSubject: Re: Maskgirl and Maskguy powers unleash powers unleash part 1   Thu Jan 16, 2014 5:18 am

Not bad
A few grammar mistake tho.

I recommend you distinguish between actions and speeches by using asterisk to show what a person is doing, ex *Runs away* instead of just saying Runs Away





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PostSubject: Re: Maskgirl and Maskguy powers unleash powers unleash part 1   Thu Jan 16, 2014 5:27 am

Alright, man my grammar so horrible try to write a story turn into play, I will I can try fixing the grammar using auto correct.


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PostSubject: Re: Maskgirl and Maskguy powers unleash powers unleash part 1   Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:30 am

heh awesome Smile






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PostSubject: Re: Maskgirl and Maskguy powers unleash powers unleash part 1   Fri Jan 17, 2014 5:59 am

Glad you like the story. I figured something out some of you think my story is a play its not its actually suppost to be a story I figured out my story to actually be a story it must be longer.


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