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 An Original by Lady of Orichalcos

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PostSubject: An Original by Lady of Orichalcos   Sat Jan 04, 2014 3:54 am

Love is not for the weak willed nor those who fear to be hurt. Love is not kind, it is not gentle. When you feel love in your heart, know that it will pain you. Maybe not today or the next day. Maybe the pain won't set in until a year from now, but it will be there. Love can kill you, bring the most brutal pain to your heart as you have ever felt. But love is worth the pain, if you find someone worth dying for.~
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PostSubject: Re: An Original by Lady of Orichalcos   Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:37 am

Hooray, poetry is my jam man.
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PostSubject: Re: An Original by Lady of Orichalcos   Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:53 am

Thank you Pride. I've not written any in quite a long time.
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PostSubject: Re: An Original by Lady of Orichalcos   Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:37 am

Free verse eh? Seems like something I'd do, by that I mean i used to practice free verse a lot.

I like it because it's raw. It's imperfect in that you didn't try to make it rhyme, and the message itself expresses how you view love as a somewhat imperfect art as well. All in all a great bit of coincidence there, or perhaps the intent of a genius not quite sure. Either way it's nicely done, I do hope to see more from you in the future ^.^



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PostSubject: Re: An Original by Lady of Orichalcos   Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:48 pm

Thank you Vent~

It makes me feel much more confident about my writing to know an experienced writer enjoyed it.
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